This essay was very intriguing. You took an incredibly complicated AP Open Essay Question and related it to your story, “The Metamorphosis”, very well. You did a good job of incorporating different evidence and making your points very clear. Your essay had a very strong focus and great fluidity.
The main problem with this, however, was due to typing errors. There were a few sentences that were not grammatically correct due to the phrasing being off. Though the message behind these sentences was clear due to the surrounding thoughts and the focus of the essay, the sentences by themselves were fairly easy to misunderstand. Other than that, it was very well done.
This essay was very intriguing. You took an incredibly complicated AP Open Essay Question and related it to your story, “The Metamorphosis”, very well. You did a good job of incorporating different evidence and making your points very clear. Your essay had a very strong focus and great fluidity.
ReplyDeleteThe main problem with this, however, was due to typing errors. There were a few sentences that were not grammatically correct due to the phrasing being off. Though the message behind these sentences was clear due to the surrounding thoughts and the focus of the essay, the sentences by themselves were fairly easy to misunderstand. Other than that, it was very well done.